Wednesday, February 17, 2010

STORMBEAKER

3 comments:

  1. I think Storm Breaker was a very good book. It had a lot of action in it and a little bit of myistory in it to. I would say the the diction was middle class here is a sentence from Storm Breaker and why I think its middle class diction.( When the door bell rings at three in the morning its never a good sign). this is why I think this is middle class fixtion because its not chat speak and its not poitry.

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  2. Alden,

    That's a great lead sentence that you quoted. It's short and to the point, and it grabs the reader's attention right away. It suggests that some big event is about to be revealed. That could be a lesson for your writing. How do you draw the reader in?

    I'm glad you're explaining more about why you like the book. Can you tell us more? What sort of action is it? Why do you like action? What does the mystery do?

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  3. I wouldn't want to say more because it might give some of the book away. Its sort of killy blowy upy action as in the main character pushing the bad guy into a jet engine and turning him in to mince meat. I like the action because it never gets boring. What do you mean What does the mystery do?

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