Wednesday, September 30, 2009

why I think Redwall is good

Why I like it is becuse I like the phraseing like I will have your skulls for scittls wich I think means I will kill you if you have any more problems I will kill you .

and I like animals fighting like huwmans in the mid evil time.

and sofar I rely rely like it sofar

3 comments:

  1. Keagan,

    I like your use of a direct quotation from the book, giving us a specific example of what you're talking about. It makes your point stronger and clearer. Remember to set quotations aside by using quotation marks. For example, you might write that I like the phrasing like, "I will have your skulls for scittls." Also, be sure to check your spelling when quoting from a book.

    Do you think the book would be as interesting if all the characters were humans? I bet it wouldn't; I wonder why that is. What do you think?

    josiah

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  2. I think that it is needed for the characters to be animals. do you think that is true?

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  3. I think it would mean I will kill you for scittls

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