Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Finding New Books
However, I didn't want the boring certainty of something I had already read. I wanted to discover a new story. How does one find a new book when one is in the mood for something specific? Several of you have mentioned friends or family members who can recommend books, based on what they know of your tastes. I tried that today; I asked the librarians at the Fletcher Free Library, in Burlington, if they could recommend somebody like Makine. I had to think hard for a second to really identify what it was about Makine's books that I enjoyed, but I was pleased by the results. The first recommendation was Paul Auster, whom we have read in class. A brilliant suggestion, except for the fact that I've read all the Auster in the library. However, I ended up with four authors, all new to me, and walked away with two new books.
Another tool is the website, gnooks.com. This website suggests authors related by writing style or thematic style. You type in an author you like, and the website creates a web of similar authors. An easy way to get some direction towards new books you might like. Sometimes it's successful, sometimes you end up with a dud, but it's a starting point.
Speaking of libraries, are you all patrons of your local libraries? The school library is quite impressive, but there are lovely libraries with other books all across Vermont. Fairfax, Fairfield, Georgia, St. Albans, and Waterville all have local libraries, so you don't have to fight over the one copy of Redwall.
josiah
Salamandastron-Some Thoughts
In Salamandastron, I’m getting to the exciting part – the climax! Last night, I had trouble putting it down. When I have trouble putting a book down, that means I’m really enjoying it. Does Thrugg succeed, or will everyone at Redwall die? Who will win Salamandastron – Urthstripe or Ferahgo? Do Samkim and Aurula ever get the sword of Martin the Warrior back? I won’t tell you what’s going on – I don’t want to give anything away – but I will tell you that those questions are being answered as I read. I want to know the answers!
Brian Jacques, the author, keeps switching between seemingly separate stories, so that you don’t tire of reading just one. He leaves one on a cliff-hanger and then switches to another, and as a result, there are multiple cliff-hangers at once. You want to keep reading to find out what happens next in one story, so you want to read until you get there. You end up reading part of one of the other stories and you get hooked on that one, so it goes on and on. (Is there a name for the technique of having multiple plotlines and switching between them?)
In the series, the characters are all animals. Mice, squirrels, hedgehogs, moles, otters, badgers, and shrews are always good, while rats, ferrets, weasels, stoats, and foxes are always evil. I actually care about every one of the species listed as “vermin,” and I think it’s a bit unfair never to let them have a chance to be the heroes. I mean, in most children’s stories, the wolves and foxes are bad guys but the mice and rabbits are good guys. This series pretty much sticks with the traditional good-evil roles stuck to those species. That is pretty much the one thing that bugs me about it. What would make things really exciting would be to have, say, a good fox or weasel, or even more unusual, an evil mouse or hedgehog.
Well, I’m into talking animal stories. At the moment, I’m making attempts at a series of my own – but in mine, species makes no difference in matters of good and evil.
Warroir cats
The music of the dolphins!
Jaws
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why I think Redwall is good
and I like animals fighting like huwmans in the mid evil time.
and sofar I rely rely like it sofar
Dragonspell
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Jaws
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
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Salamandastron-Update
Meanwhile, Ferahgo has sent Farran the Poisoner, a black fox, into Salamandastron. He was supposed to poison all the food and drink in the mountain, but he made it too strong. Someone died, and everyone else caught wind of the Poisoner’s scheme. They chased him and have him cornered. Now, Urthstripe is ready to duel him one-on-one.
Mara (a badger) and Pikkle (a hare) are two young ones who ran away from Salamandastron towards the beginning of the book. They were frustrated with all the rules there, and decided to run off with their newfound “friends” Klitch (a weasel, Ferahgo’s son) and Goffa (some random ferret from Ferahgo’s horde). It turns out that Klitch and Goffa were just tricking them, and they were captured by Ferahgo’s horde. A couple hares from Salamandastron helped them to escape, but then, they were captured by toads. They were thrown in a hole, to be eaten later. There are many shrews in the hole, members of the Guosssom – Guerrilla Union of South Stream Shrews of (did they mean in?) Mossflower. One of them is Nordo, son of Log-a-Log, their leader. Just when it looks like they’re done for, Log-a-Log and the Guosssom come and rescue them. Now, they are on a mission. You see, once, when Nordo was little, he was playing with the Blackstone – whoever holds the Blackstone is Log-a-Log by Guosssom law – and he lost it on an island in the middle of a huge lake. A white badger took it, so they’re sending Mara to get it back. However, in that lake lurks a monster known as the Deepcoiler…
Samkim the squirrel and Arula the mole are going after the sword of Martin the Warrior. It was taken earlier by two stoats, but both of them are dead now – one by Dryditch Fever, the other by decapitation. He was found by a search party from Ferahgo. He was a deserter, and Ferahgo wanted to make sure that no one escaped him. Now, a fox has the sword. Samkim and Aurula met a hedgehog, Spriggat, who is helping them track the fox and his party.
Redwall
RANGERS APPRENTICE
dragonspell
Jaws
Monday, September 21, 2009
Responding as Writers
Fear not! In class on Friday, after reading Paul Auster's "Why Write?" we identified some details that make writing interesting. First of all, he created context by giving details that fleshed out the story; thus we cared about the story (not just a "then I did this and then I did this" roller coaster).
I also noticed how many of us had a personal response to the story, mostly because we could identify with the emotions experienced by the main character. This emotion answers the question, "How do I relate to this story?" We have all felt disappointment. I imagine we have all idolized someone or something, especially at that young age. Maybe we don't know the first thing about baseball, but we know about wanting something and not getting it.
Thirdly, the piece very clearly answers the question, "So what?" By drawing the thread from the experience with Willie Mays to the devastation felt to carrying a pencil to using that pencil, Auster creates the story that this childhood experience caused him to become a writer.
This personal essay, I think, stands as a concise model of good writing. However, I encourage you to use it to deepen your reading. Because you all are reading books you enjoy (if you are not, stop now and get one you do enjoy), you are experiencing some connection, some hook. As you read, question that connection. How do I relate to this story? Why do I care? How has the author managed to keep me invested in the lives of people very distant from me? If you are reading Jaws, what makes the book different from newspaper accounts of shark attacks that happen all the time? If you are reading Redwall or any book that uses animal characters, how is it that you can understand what the animals are feeling?
I suspect that you will start to notice what it is you like about your favorite writing, you may appreciate the books more, and you will have more tools to improve your own writing.
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
Salamandastron
The Redwall books tell at least two stories that occur at the same time. That is one of the things I enjoy about the series. In fact, there’s one main thing I don’t like about the series. Virtually all the mice, squirrels, otters, badgers, and hedgehogs are good, while virtually all the ferrets, weasels, stoats, foxes, and rats are evil. I actually like all the species listed as “vermin,” especially foxes, and I think it’s a bit unfair to have them all be bad just because they’re what they are.